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Terrase In the Desert

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Description

Ladak, India 2008.
Image size
1557x2069px 4.53 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon PowerShot S5 IS
Shutter Speed
1/636 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
10 mm
ISO Speed
80
Date Taken
Jul 16, 2008, 6:14:25 AM
Sensor Size
4mm
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

First off, I love this photo and it has a lot of artistic value.

Vision and Orginality are both very good, and I can't say much about them besides that even though I notice a little village, I can't quite make them out, which kind of annoys me.

For your technique, you have captured the idea of a landscape photo very excellently. Like I said, the village below could be brought closer. Also, the mountains in the far back seem almost fuzzy or soft. This can probably be fixed by using a tripod, although I'm not sure if you would have been able to use on there.

For the impact, although the landscape is very beautiful and it gives a very good view of mountains, it doesn't seem out of the ordinary at all. It seems like a regular photo.

Trying to make the picture seem more unique or different would definitely help you out. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>